Non Native English speaker - could you please read the beginning of my book and tell me what you think?

Wow! Fantastic. You have a really great sense of prose and flow. I could picture the scene immediately in my mind as I read. I would really like to see where this goes and how the story line develops. You've conveyed a lot of emotion in just a few paragraphs - the intensity is phenomenal! You've done a terrific job, I would love to see how this progresses. Keep up the good work and keep writing!!!